Notbad
Well this was notbad especially for a first animation i did like what you did here with tye spritebwork too a nice film and was pretty impressed
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Author Comments
This is my first flash movie so vote fairly please and it is about mario.This is part 1 and I hope you like it ;)
was it really worth it?
voice acting i would give a 1... graphic2... storyline0 this dame movie makes no sence what so ever
Woo
For a first flash I'm impressed! It didn't suck at all, the sprites look neat, the scenery is good and there is actualy a plot to it as well. A nice mix of animational action. Great results. keep up the good work!
-cd-
gastly responds:
thanks man =D
Ill be leinient cuz its your first...
First off, REALLY SHORT! Please make it longer if your gonna submit anything. Second, the VO lacked an awful lot of emotion. And Mario was still walking as he fell. Sorry, it just doesn't look right. But don't take this the wrong way. I don't want to be the bad guys here. Just make it longer, and work on the animation and VoiceOvers. You have a good start for a storyline.
That's It?
Wow, that went by pretty fast, and didn't really have too much substance. But the accent on the mushroom fellows was refreshing. =)
gastly responds:
yeah sorry that was a bit short, but check out part 2 its much longer ;)