Good first

It was a good first flash. However the main character was very unappealling. Good concept and good try. Keep it up.

Good first flash

Too bad for the cake or whatever pastry it was... kinda felt bad for him too though. Nice first flash. Keep at it.

LOL!

This was so cute! It put a smile on my face. Great job for your first time. Keep practicing and make some more.

good start

Well, the story was original and funny (allthough I don't get why the bike didn't hit the guys head, considering it was really close to the cake :) ), but next time, take another day to improve graphics if possible. The music was great though and all in all, it was a nice start.

cool

EXELLENT 4 your 1st movie