Heh heh heh..
That was entertaining for the short while it lasted, keep it up, youv got lots of potential ;)
Oh and thanx for using my music :P
~WOLF~
Author Comments
this is my first animation i hope you enjoy it. if not i still have time to learn to do better either way. It is my little story that is weird and different from many.
69er responds:
thanks. i'm glad u didn't mind me using to music. i would have asked spect i was short on time. school projects have deadlines lol.
cool
it was pretty good for a first animation, though a little bit late for halloween i think. overall, it was cool, had nice drawings, good audio and it was fun to watch. i would suggest browsing a couple tutorials though to help you get better, you have some pretty good potential in making flash, so use them to maximize it.
69er responds:
thank you, but who said that it had be halloween for pumpkins. and thanks again. just remember it was a school project
I like turtles.
You have a truly great style. The graphics were really pretty, but you're lacking in the animation area. Thought there were a little too many vines in the beginning too. The sound went really well with the visual part. Next time though, make the story more interesting. I think by making the pumpkin walk a little further and eat more things (and a little more clearer, now it was a little: animal-pumpkin walks to animal-animal gone) before it gets eaten by the turtle would have already been a nice improvement. Or let the pumpkin attempt to eat the turtle first.
2 main things
there are two main things that need improvement:
1.) your animation was choppy. the art was good, but poor animation completely ruins that.
2.) the overall idea was kinda dumb. i mean, an evil pumpkin eats things and then a giant turtle eats him? im all for randomness but that was just plain stupid.
fuckin hell
this reminds me of gargoyles quest on the origional game boy.
