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Nice story and great choice of music. Don't know why, but I just loved how you drew those flowers. 2 things though:
1. I think you made a perspective mistake with the bus and the car. She seems to be driving/looking the other way. Or am I wrong?
2. What's the name on the girl's house? Coz I only can read old greek and I don't know if the pronunction of letters changed, but otherwise it seems unprounancable.