uhg

work on the animation

"Yawn"

Because I'm generous, I'm giving you a 2 stars.
Do not anger me boy!

Okay for a newbie

Your ideas were good, though presentation is sorely lacking...

not too awful bad

for a beginner not too bad still got plenty of loose ends to tighten up but overall im giving you an 8 most people start flash animations basically scanning pics of already existing characters or making a simple stick figure movie or the ever so famous for newgrounds mario movies. most aren't that bad but you took your own characters and made a nice valiant effort to make a movie. good luck

umm...

this movie only has like 3 sound effects. and it also sucks, not just one ass, but, many asses. the best part was when the dude said 'OK' when the other dude told him to go screw himself. but that wasnt funny enough to raise the humor above 1....
Yes, I am an asshole...