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Average Anime

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Yes its an average anime in my eyes.

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awesome thing man

i hate anime so much and i think it should go back to japan but would u still make halo flashes those r great also so keep it up with this series and the halo and maybe for the next halo u could make it team snipers? ok well gj dude thanks for the flash it was good for a laugh seeya

Original-SHM responds:

Thanks, for the review man. Glad you liked it.

wild

hey dude ..your sister is hot.

decent start

This first episode has quite some potential, but it could use some improvement.
Sound: I liked the opening song, but the voices could be a little more clear. I didn't always got what they said.
Graphics: Just a few additions, like making their hair shiny and giving some detail to the eyes.
Story: Don't make it such a "who cares" story. Instead, try making it a really bizarre, complex story that doesn't make sense in any way known in this universe. Coz that's what anime usually is about.
Characters: I loved the sister, nice work there. But don't overdo it ok. Don't turn her into some kind of tramp. And the hero could use a little more attitude. The ghost and the old man were okay (but they had the worst voice problems)
I hope this helps.

Original-SHM responds:

I'll try and make the voices more clear in ep.2 thanks for the review.

Review

+Play button
+Making fun of anime
-But not in a good way
-A little sloppy
-Annoying sound
-Not a lot of movement
-Lame plot
-Anime

I'd suggest making fun of anime in a different way, such as making fun of the lazy/ridiculous/eye sore aspect of it, meaning things like teardrops on the side of people's faces, people all of a sudden making weird facial expressions in front of some colorful background, people having sudden mood changes, lazy animation techniques, and the rest of that pocky stuff. One way to do this would be to have anime characters interacting with logical characters.

good end

it was pretty decient sorry but not enoough violence or blood

Credits & Info

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4,000
Votes
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Score
3.65 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 27, 2005
6:45 PM EST