not bad one

a bit short, but a good message in it. i liked it... though i'm no big fan of this style of animation.
i think that this would've been great as a school project.... if you ever have a flash project for school... you should present this one in your class.

It goes on and on...

So the flash doesn't truely end, but it does get it's point across. The animation is fluid, the graphics fit, the generic music track works. Very good flash.

kool

good point across but kinda boring

you've got potential

i liked the way how you made the screen follow the paper as if something dramatic was going to happen to it. you can definitely do something good just elaborate more

Cool stuff!

Lol, the end was pretty funny. Keep it up.