really a very solid concept, but you still made a good rhythm in this case!!!

Solid concept good work on this rhyming was good

Pretty good...

That was a fully developed concept,wah, i don't like the rhyming (previous poster) get a life, tell me what the appeal of that would be if it just told the story of a lonely worm? This was good, with minimal animation story book style.

I liked it.

I liked the style, the rhyming was the one part that freaked me out. :| Definatly could have more things in this style of flash. Minus the rhymes. <.<;;

good, creepy, but good....

it was good and creepy lets both hope it scares a lil child some where