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T.R.F. Chapter2

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Note: before watching, watch chapter1 first.
I had been pressured lately by too much schoolwork and diong this in record time has really stressed me out.
But all this persevering hard work has paid off and here it is: Chapter II of The Redeeming Factor

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It wasn't bad

But there were a few inconsistancies in the animation. For instance, when Marshal orders his troops, his mouth looks detatched. Also, when his troops are attacking the colony, the explosions don't match up with the attacks fired.

Overall I think it was an interesting flash and the art, especially of the ships, was superb. Keep up the good work.


But kinda slow...

critiqUe109 responds:

Yes, I too was a bit dissappointed at the rate it went, but soon it will be fast paced.

A nice second chapter...

I just got through Chapter 1 and I must say you've made a few improvemnts between the two. The sound once again went pretty good with the mood you were setting, and the graphics were nice. I give this an 8/10 only because I'm really not a fan of slow-paced movies such as these. Maybe chapter 3 could be sped up a little?

Good luck in the future and Merry Christmas!

Pretty Interesting

I didn't watch the first chapter because chapter2 should be able to stand up on its own merits.
I have to say that despite some minor flaws it was an interesting flash.
Why would there be remote controlled grammaphone style record players in the future? Although it is your view of the future, so it's not necessarily wrong.
The face wasn't really that well drawn. Use referance in future.
That will help alot.
Your choice of music suited the flash well.

Over all, a pretty good movie.

critiqUe109 responds:

Well I gave the thought that this commander was a somwhat classy guy wanting to cling into the old stuff. I liked these old disks that run on a diamond needle, it is simply cool to notice how it makes sound.
For the people, yes I will do what I could do to fix them up.

Cool Graphics!

The movie was pretty cool and those ships looked hand draewn keep it up!

critiqUe109 responds:

Yup, I love hand drawn ships, this was from my third year high school notebooks where i keep loads of drawings which I still keep. It is still there up to today, try making some kick ass ships, they will surely love it. :)

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3.70 / 5.00

Dec 23, 2005
7:01 AM EST