british comedy ehh....
I didnt know that i could laf a little bit it was pretty funny but it needs better graphics and it would of been cool if you saw the comp. screen (better graphics)
Nigel wants to venture into a local pub to meet internet girlfriend. But he's not exactly what she's expecting.
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british comedy ehh....
I didnt know that i could laf a little bit it was pretty funny but it needs better graphics and it would of been cool if you saw the comp. screen (better graphics)
haha, pretty cool
i actually enjoyed that a lot :D you did the whole thing very well. kudos on the voices...not sure how many schoolboys talk like that, more likely for them to be "gangster" nowadays, but they were well done and suited the characters. nice graphics, but not that much animation. good lip sync and, i may have mentioned this, vey nice character design.
I'm looking forward to the next one, if there is one :D
4/5
Hehe
Cute accent, I liked this, but Nigel's voice bothered me a little - I know he was supposed to have a British accent, but he sounds a little hoarse.
Besides that, this was a nice flash, keep it up. ^^
Thanks for the review EbbyO, I appreciate your input. But I didn't want you to go away without knowing that the reason Nigel's voice sounds hoarse in the second half is he is trying to sound like an adult. In reality he is only a 13 year old school boy and the series is set at his boarding school. I can see how if you don't know the set up it could be confusing, especially when you only submit a few episodes of a series.
Adios,
BH
This could be better
The pace could do with some picking up, 'specially seeing as it's British humor. The movements could be less jerky, music would be a definite help. Also, I'm not quite sure how you could help this, but it was rather bland throughout. Maybe picking up the pace would help with that. I'm not sure. At least the drawing style's alright, aside from the jerkiness. I like the attention to detail, like the coat pegs and the like. Good try mate. Better luck next time.
pretty good
That was pretty well done. I think you just need a little more music. Pariticularly at the end when they're just sitting at the bustop. You could have also used a fade-out effect there. good work.