Too short.
I think it should be longer. Some backround music and sound would also be nice. It was too easy, maybe Santa should move around or go up the chimmy then down again a few times. Make it a challenge.
Author Comments
This was done for a flashmxfiles contest, of which I won a book. I used David from Daz3D as Santa, and the free poser model AnimeDoll as "your girl". The bed, dresser, nightstand, and lamp, are all from free 3d models found around the net... everything else, minus Santa's Sac (which was a purchased model), was drawn freehand in Flash.
I debated having "your girl" sleeping to better concrete the surprize that the animation wasn't talking about a little holiday adultry, but instead about... well check it out and see.
lol
Any flash needs sound to be truely appreciated; you could have had a jingly tune in the background, and either santa going "Ho ho ho!" or the girl giggling when you go onto the final scene... if possible the flashlight mask could have been faded around the outside, it lookes a bit weird just having a solid circle of light. Other than that this was a funny little submission.
rjcain responds:
I see many saying the same thing about the sound, and I actually feel dumb for not doing it... it was for a contest and had to be 50kbs... without thinking I immediately posted it here after adding the NG logo... live and learn huh...
Funny, but not much of a Flash
You should make some actual movies to submit to NG :P
Hehehe!!!
^^ That was good, I really did enjoy it! xD Gave me a chuckle and such! n.n I wasen't expecting anything like this. ^^Good job!
Original
That was certainly original. Great idea, i don't think its ever been done before. If ya had jingle bells or something its would have been great.
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