okay
the drawings were okay, but the animation was way too short and rather random and i think that hurt this animation's potential from doing good.
Author Comments
Sort of a rough parody of The Big Bad Wolf, starring Harold.
TheMentalInstitute responds:
I think I agree... thanks for your opinions
Ahhhh...
Graphics are good but your sound needs a BIG improvement. Half the time i cant here what the characters are saying and the music needs a bit of work. Also your theme reminds me a lot about Little Red Riding Hood... and i dont like that.
TheMentalInstitute responds:
Yeah, the sound was terrible, I think I learned my lesson with that.. the point of this cartoon was to be sort of a parody of Little Red Riding Hood, so maybe that's why it reminds you of it.. I just thought it would be fun to try.
Yeah...
Way too long, not enough to keep your attention span. Kinda bland. Back to the boards, my friend.
TheMentalInstitute responds:
I agree.. but I thought it was a little bit good still.
Just "erm".
It was... OK. The script was average, the animation let it down a little. The sound was awful though, you can hardly hear the dialogue and the small bursts of music were rather repetetive and didn't really contribute to the animation as a whole.
TheMentalInstitute responds:
Yes, after watching it again I realize I did a terrible job at the music... will try hard to improve in future cartoons.
that was better then my first attempt
that wasnt that bad... ok script. so many people submit crap that just doesnt have any story...
excellent walk cycles! :P
but yeah it does seem like it was done by a kid.
just because it doesnt fit my 'expectations of animation'
doesnt mean it wasnt good. keep it up. just get more technical and better story's.
TheMentalInstitute responds:
Thanks... I guess...
I am a kid... or at least mentally...