The more I watch you...
The more I watch your movies, the more I start to appreciate them. That was really good, although it took me more than one watch to see that. Keep up the good work, and don't lose that style.
-Joe-
This was an entry for the Home Movies "Small Shorts" competition. The file's a little larger and a bit grainy since the was final version was edited in Premiere (all animated in flash, though).
The more I watch you...
The more I watch your movies, the more I start to appreciate them. That was really good, although it took me more than one watch to see that. Keep up the good work, and don't lose that style.
-Joe-
eh
Graphics were blurry, sound was muffled and I dont know... It could have been better... I just did not enjoy it with those problems... fix it and give it another try...
Great Stuff!
I watched this little short, and it inspired me to watch the rest of your submissions. What you really need to do is make a whole episode - a long thing. These have a sort of clerks vibe (aside from the video store aspect, i'm talking about customer relations here!) Though these are great, their potential i feel is not fully explored within their timeframe.
Also, when you get to that point, i feel you should have a co-star on it. When you start making longer cartoons, or hell, even just MORE cartoons, i think you'll find that your little video clerk can't hump the whole thing on his own.
You've got a great start for a good series - i'm adding you to my fav' list so i can keep tabs.
Oh and your sound quality rocks - good work!
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Thanks for your input. We're actually working on what you just described here; it's in a classroom setting and the video guy is only one of several characters. It should be ready in a month or two. It's a longer format as well. Thanks again for you thoughful comments!
Too Grainy
It's a decent flash, but the grainy images really hurt it, it also seems like it should be a bit longer, as it seemed to end abruptly.
Adequate ...
The general quality of this piece was good, I didn't find it particularly funny but that is a matter of opinion. It should be protected at the least for others to make their opinion on your humor.