O.K bad
Dat was just, horrible...
This is a 2nd version of my previous post, edited to cut down on time. Please let me know if it works better.
O.K bad
Dat was just, horrible...
Moderate
A lot of work went into this, but the result was rather slow and boring.
I liked the pictures on the wall. I could hear all the words, which is good, but somehow the sound was not as good as it could be.
The end was annoying.
Boring...
Graphics: Pretty good. The animation is so-so, but not in anyway bad.
Style: The story just drags on and on. There seems to be no real point to it. The characters are pretty much the same.
Sound: The sound is audible and good, but is setup in a so-so way.
Violence: Book flying to guy's head.
Humor: Not really comical.
Overall: This looks good and the sound is above average, but the storyline was just dull. There was no humor, no a point. I don't know if you are trying to be funny, or if it was suppose to be serious. I have no idea what the aim of your story is. Perhaps it is the fact that it drags on. That is my problem with this.
dont lisin to that shithead xKoSxDominatioN
i thought you did a great job,
you definitly have you own style of animation,
like take the fact that all the out lines were diffrent colors,
thats all a part of the origional style of this flash.
great job keep it up.
uhh
sry dude but this didnt make much sense. the sound wasnt that great, maybe if you added subtitles or something it would make it better.