pr3tty g00d!
Allthough it is lacking vioce and animation, the drawings were nice, words well written and the plot good. It's pretty original too ... keep up the good work!
-cd-
Author Comments
"Watch the world crumble." A spate of killings ravage a broken society in the not so distant future.
Crime, a bit of fantasy, some research, and a lot of patience come together here to set up a world not very different from yours, except for the urgency of a certain situation, higher up than your presidents and your ministers.
Thanks to those who've voted on it so far. I hope that you'll find part 3 (coming soon) to be more comprehensive and interesting, and that your hopes will be justified.
Please note that is not an anti-semitic submission. I realise now that certain elements early in the story may give that impression at first, and for that, in retrospect, I apologize.
Thank you for taking the time to view what's been posted so far.
Meh...
I protected it, and thought it was ok, but only because we're in the end times. I hope everyone has a good, sharp knife and a bug-out kit ready. Bleak and gloomy days ahead...
That aside, you should make your own series like other ng users have done, works for them, it'd work for you. I look forward to anything else you make (provided it is more than a slideshow).
Needs A Little Work
As interesting as this may be, It is really only a slide show that zooms out of pictures and some text thrown in. If you were to spend some time creating your own characters and animating them, a higher score would be much more likley. The whole idea of this def. grabs my interest, and i WOULD like to see you go somewhere with it.
I protected this just to see how it turns out. I wish you the best of luck, and hope you take my critic into consideration. Good Luck!
LeonardRawles responds:
Thanks. Hope part 3 and 4 (coming soon) meets expectations...
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I protected this, but only because the second better be better. If it isn't than fuck off and die.
Giving you the benefit of a doubt.
It's way too short to give us any useful information. All we have here are some disparate fragments with no idea how they fit together. I'm going to be optimistic and assume that part two and so forth will make sense of all this.