Kind of funny actually

Three words for this movie: Stupid,Short,Sweet And funny. Oh wait that's 4. oh well!

Sorry...

Stuff like this I don't usually like. It's all about the timing, and this one didn't have it.

It's like the example of two people in a diner. They're talking for about 5 minutes, the audience is wrapped up in their dialogue, then *BOOM* A bomb under the table goes off. Sure, it evokes a fear, surprise, and bewilderment in the audience. But only until they understand what happened.

But you can make the emotions last longer by showing the bomb ticking under the table when they first sit down. The screen would spllit so you could both watch the two people talking and the bomb's timer counting down.

That's prolonged fear. That causes thinking on the audience's part, wondering if they'll survive. That pulls them in and makes the explosion more meaningful.

I'm not trying to be a film wh*ore, just noticing that you had a decent premise and have a good art style, so I'm giving advice.

i've seen that band!

now that was awesome. i swear i've seen a band that was like that... the sound just about scared the dog snot out of everyone in my office, but i think that was a good thing.

the character you have looks quite original.. kind of looks like a missing muppet character... like... a little chicken with teeth. you could have a whole band of them!

overall, great job. keep going with it.

Pointless

There was no storyline, no point of watching it or listening to it. Maybe adding something to it, like a storyline, but you said you did your best so i hope there are others.

awsome

ehm,
aw my ears... my sounds was puted on the maxium!
oh well it was funny, nice job.