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it's not bad for a first flash. like someone said before, the speech needs to be clearer. I'd also work on timing. For example, when the rabbit it headbanging, it's extremely fast, and doesn't quite flow with the music. Later on, when stuff is being thrown at the windshield, it's way too slow. Something being thrown at a windshield at high speed should be much faster. Other than that, I'm not entirely sure what the plot was about. But again, it's not bad, just needs some tweeking.

Bunny

Wow, I love all flashes with bunnies. Good music choices but some of the voice sync was scratchy. Awesome!

Dammit People!

Did you even read the page of qualifiers when you submitted this? This is not the place for your practice works. This is not the place to have everyone judge your school work. This is the place for animated shorts, games, and blood baths...made in Flash. (Think, FINISHED PROJECTS) So you get a zero for this pile of crap that wastes everyone's time and disapoints the hell out of me. Seriously, what happened to the good old days where I watched these animations and my jaw dropped and thought to myself, I wish I had made that?

This was you first flash, DAMN!

You got skillz! I voted 5 just for the fact that you pulled off something like this your first time. Keep up the good work and keep practicing.

Good start, but far from a masterwork

For your first flash, you deminstrate a great talent for cinamatic flow. That can be one of the hardest things to master. Graphics as better them most begainers, although you have a long way to go on them. Voice acting was scratchy, try practicing a bit with the mic to get the best sounds. Bottom line, keep practicing and you might go places kid. Good luck and God speed.