A bit too close to Transitions
As a Star Wars film, this has great promise. There are some really well constructed parts to this, unfortunetly, there are also some problems. The sound is the first issue. The second is that I am really confused if this concerns Malek and Reven from nearly 1000 years before the clone wars. The third, and perhaps easiest to fix, would be that the Jedi is way too similar to the two jedi from SW:Transitions. You have talent, I just dont want to see it marred by people claiming you stole the character.
well you see
yeah it was'nt bad for a first episode , was a bit short voices were a little hard to hear maybe step away from the mike a little because i did'nt a single word of what yoda said
and also is it just me or does the info screen look somewhat famiilier
Good storyline but some bad things I noticed were...
1. Voices hard to understand (especially yoda)
2. 3 armed trooper (and he was stroking? The map
3. Shoulda been longer even for a 1st episode
Good luck with the rest of the series I'm looking forward to them.
I suggest buying and reading Star Wars: The New Essential Chronology. It's a good book with a lot of information on the films and the expanded universe. Playing through Knights of the Old Republic once on the XBox doesn't make you an expert. The Clone Wars happened about 4,000 years after the Jedi Civil War. Revan and Malak have been dead for a long time.
The animation is inconsistent, and the sound is quite poor.