I <3 Beer...
I really don't know where to begin.
Congrats on front page...but honestly I don't think it deserves it.
Sprite Movies are usually a favorite of mine if done right. This movie was missing some decent humor, definitely could have used better delivery on those jokes... Could have broadened the story line somewhat. Especially concerning the beer heist...Towards the end it seemed you just tossed a bunch of sprites in a room for a party.
It was lacking some sound effects I think.
It was sub-titled and was paced nicely. Though the Subs on top seemed a little taxing and took away from viewing the movie.
If possible I would include some decent voice overs. Given your entire script an actor delivering those jokes verbally would have perhaps increased their comedic value...