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erm.. it was ok..
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-UPDATE: Hit skip to skip the face drawings to go to more fbf!
My first real animation. I spent around two weeks working on this, and it came out pretty well. Main animation is a little under 3 mins 40 seconds, bonus animations run anywhere from 2-4 minutes each.
Main animation is FBF. All menu's and buttons should be working.
Please review whether or not you liked it. I am really interested in how i can make my next animation better. Keep in mind this is my first real animation, so any tips or pointers would be highly appreciated.
Watch, have fun, and enjoy!
ggs.
haha
and you said your better then me at animating
Not bad, but try different things
Like the last guy said it had alot of the same things (the face changing, the wave eating the words and the 2 eyes joining) it would be better if you did a sort of story or even random things, but different. And maybe speed up the frames per second, alot of people said that to me when i made my fbf flash, so give it another go with the constructive critisism you get and you'll get a better score for sure.
ratchet-ut responds:
understandable. i took that into mind, thanks for the review.
well
ur pretty good at fbf. its not that bad its just too continious. i kept seeing the same thing over and over. i didnt mind the face but once was enough. i didnt wanna see that for most of the movie. and the wave was in there too many times. and the two eyes coming together. it looks good but i dont wanna see it more than once. get it? im just trying to help. ur good im just giving advice for u to be better
ratchet-ut responds:
i understand. although each time something happened twice, it was drawn twice, not copied, but i do understand what you mean. thanks for the tip.
Its alright..
Really nothing too new or old. Its pretty creative, and it looks like this took a while to do, so I say, nice job.
ratchet-ut responds:
thanks man. i appreciate it.