A decent movie
It was a decent movie, but there´s still a lot of room for improvement. First of, I think the song you added didn´t actually suited the movie that well. It seemed like you didn´t choose it cause you think it suits in this flash. But more like you added it just because you thought it was a cool song. I suggest you pick something different, a more relaxing theme perhaps. Second, the drawings and animation both need some more work. The drawings weren´t that bad, but they could be better. The animation however was pretty bad. Vivi walked in a very strange way, it looked pretty ugly in my opinion. Third, the movie needs more speed. The pace of the movie seemed a bit slow, which made it kind of boring. Maybe you should make us press the spacebar or make us click on something to go to the next text balloon.
Overall 6 out of 10, 3 out of 5. It was still an okay movie in my opinion, even with all the negative points I wrote above. Try to improve your flash on the areas I mentioned and I think we could have some pretty good stuff here.
~Auz, Review Request Club