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Stories from Hollywood 1

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This was a thank you card for my agent and managers who have worked very hard to get me some great meetings at some of the TV networks. I know the art work isn't great and it's basically a monologue but I figure that some of you may get a kick out of this...

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((( NICE ARTWORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This made me laugh, and i must say it was very impressive such as the "CHARACTER" and backround but you could have added more scenes, like have the guy walk to differrent parts of his studio and such, and also some "SUBTITLES" would have been nice...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Voices were not bad Why not add some "SUBTITLES" just because it will improve on the flash and like in "DVD" movies you see them, and would just make it better because of people sometimes not always hearing everything clearly...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny animation and great artwork, some subtitles would make it better...

~X~

not bad

great stuff,love the story the sound was a little weak but that a minor detail,you added great graphic and animation to it which make this flash even better,nice job on it

its ok

i liked it

3/5

Hollywood? More like Hollyweird!

Any way, pretty funny.

Nice movie, but..

Could you please put more volume to that sound file? I hate putting volume up, because i usually forget to put it back down after the movie, and then watch some soon-to-be-blammed movie with screaming or similar with high volume..

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Uploaded
Dec 2, 2005
1:52 AM EST