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I'm trying to make a carttoon like the 80's thursday night sitcoms: Cheers, Night Court, Family Ties. I think the character design is OK, and I think the dialogue is good. My Animation needs work.... and constructive criticism is helpful.

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okay

well, it was a good idea and the drawings were alright, but it was actually quite boring and it was way too short.

needs some work

I found the cartoona little boring. This is probably due to the lack of background and lack of character movement during dialogue. There just isn't anything interesting to look at while listening to the characters. The dialogue seems well planned out though, I can tell you put a lot of thought into this movie.

Gave me quite a tickle.

Funny, simple, clean drawings made this flash enjoyable. The characters were well represented by their voice actors, aswell. The dry humor and the fact that it was all based upon a trite little matter was quite amusing.

The sound was a little vague, try using a headset microphone next time, and the animation left a little to be desired. Just a little bit, though.

Pull through on that next one and you'll have my five!

no more

cool looking people but this is just stupid

not one of the best things ive seen

okay now there are some problems with this flash animation first there are some problems understanding whos talking kinda but i was mosltly disapointed with the animation its not realy animation to me if its just pictures its more like a comic but you did put just a little little movement in there but other than that it was.... okay and you might want to work on some backrounds just seeing people in a white page looks like an existence to no end its just plain sad

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Nov 30, 2005
10:38 PM EST