It is my first true attempt at flash. So please do not be to harsh on me. lol.
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~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, kinda neat actually, the size of the entire flash could use some compressing but as your first it was nice work, the characters were kinda neat, could be improved as other little touch-ups, anyways notbad hope to see more sometime...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some compression and some more details with the characters...
~~OVERALL~~
A decent first try but could use some touch-ups...
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not bad
For a first flash movie, it was good. But give the characters mouthes and the sound could do with some improving.
Overall, it wasn't terrible, but it wasn't great either.
All i have to say is dude, no.
that wasnt funny, i think you tried too hard. i know i havent submitted anything to this particular site, but i now a thing or 2 about making flash movies, especially comedy. dont try to instantly come up with a lot of jokes and comedy, and DONT rip off other things unless its really funny. i give the they killed kenny moment most of the credit to the rating. but dont take it harshly, this is considered a generous rating for me.
Yeah, I am not the writter for this. I am just the would be artist behind it and a few random noises. My scripts I have come up with are alot more random and based of tangents.
Also I will not view this as harsh since you didn't say "oh this is shit" or some such. You atleast gave a reason for not liking it and you gave me some advice. Therefor it is all cool. The rating is what I expected to get on this as well. lol. But you must be a real hard ass on many things to have a 3 as generous for ppl's flash.
okay
not too bad... or good. your efforts were good though, but may i suggest browsing some of the many tutorials on here to help you out, also the audio portal for your music too.
those should be able to help you out with your future flashwork.
Thank you for the comment. I do need to work on it a bit more, but this was a job done really quick for a history project. I am serioulsy looking into bettering the audio. Trying to find a better mic and recording system.
Nice
Not bad for your first flash. I gave it a 3/5
Improve the sound quality and timings. And I'll up my rating to 4!
Thanks!