Something called spell check.

I've noticed a lot of mispelled words within flash videos, or titles, and I always find it quite annoying. I mean, how hard would it be to check the spelling before you publish your work for millions of people to see? And it's even usually simple words, such as briefing that are spelled wrong. *cough cough*. I dunno what the point of commenting about it is, but I just felt like saying it annoyed me. Perhaps you will make sure your spelling is right, and be one of the few correcting this overall, greatly annoying annoyance.

Good For A First Attempt

I'll agree, you did good for a first try and for a good school project. Your choice for music wasn't really what I had in mind for a WWII-esque film. However, you made a good choice for a film but perhaps you could've given us a little bit more?

well

for your first flash,i guess its ok,the sounds wasnt really good,the flash was kind of boring not much going on in it,still keep working on it with time you will get better at it...

spell check

You need to spell check your work, especially if you're submitting it for school. Briefing and experience are two or the words that you spelled wrong. You also need to check your punctuation and fix your lip syncing. With that said, it wasn't too bad but like Holo-Alf said, it's not Newgrounds material.

Ok

Yeah, this is good enough for a piece of school work, but I don't think it belongs on newgrounds. The lip-synching is really good though, if you make something longer and with the intention of sticking it on ng rather than for school it would have a better chance of not getting blammed. Not bad though.