But

i can't read such small text. why is luigi covered in blood? p.s., did you gve up, cause ep. 3 no exsist.

Okay, constructive criticism on it's way

Right, while it was good, it had some flaws

1:The fact that it was TOO SMALL
Please enlarge the movie, or the text, eitherway, do one, I hated having to keep zooming in+out

2:A little more, but not much more, action

3:When you use the fusion earrings from dragonball Z in a flash, please, make an honest attempt at designing a fused Mario/Luigi, and not Luigi with patches as if he's been to the slaughter house

Hopefully, you will learn from this, but overall, it was okay/good

what the FUCK?!?!?!?!

THAT WAS THE FUCKING GAYEST THING I HAVE EVER SEEN......IT WAS TOO SHORT, TEXT WAS TOO SMALL, AND IT SUCKED HUGE MONKEY BALLS

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All i have to say is fix that fucking text size!.. thats rediculous, need a f'in magnifying glass to read it.

Oh god damnit.

First, stop using sprites. They suck and everyone hates you, and everyone hates you for using them. :o

Also, if you're going to use sprites, at least make them move smoothly. Pull out your old Nintendo, pop in Super Mario Brothers 3, and move him around a bit. If your animation doesn't move like it does in the game, make it do so. Work on it until it does.

Also, make your text bigger. It was impossible to read. Pause the flash with _root.stop() and then have a button that does _root.play() on each dialogue after you click it. That way people have time to read at their own pace. Also, skip the corny "text box opening" sequence. It's annoying and wastes time. At MAX just fade the box in for one second or less after making it a movie clip then choosing the "Alpha" settings from the dropdown list in the properties editor, then set it to 0%, add a new keyframe maybe six frames later, and set it to 100% there. Then make the frames inbetween a motion tween. Presto fade-o.

Also, speed your damn framerate up. To do so, just click outside the Flash in the grey area, and click the part where it says the height/width of your file in the properties editor, then change "Frame rate" to 26. Never go below 26 fps. Ever. Or you'll be raped by angry lawn gnomes in your bed every night and no one will believe you, so you'll just have to deal with it for the rest of your life.

Also, avoid the fuck out of popular things like Mario, Metroid, Zelda, Pokemon, and things like that. Everyone's fucking sick of them. Want to do a sprite movie? Find some awesome old SNES game no one uses, like Darkstalkers. Throw in Felicia, she's hot. You get mad bonus points for including someone hot in your Flash.

PANDER TO YOUR AUDIENE! Everyone here at NG has seen a bajillion shitty NES game sprite animation cross-over battles with references and plots stolen from popular anime. WE DON'T NEED ANY MORE. Unless you kick major ass, don't bother. If you want to get recognition when you're starting out and not too good, do something original and make it look nice.

Remember, watch three animations that kick ass that you want your Flash to be like. Then watch yours. If you are then disappointed with yours, it needs more work.

Got it? Good.