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as hard as i fought i could not be tempted to eat toast but im not going to make any YOU LOSE SUBLIMINAL MESSAGE MAKER
This is just a quick flash I whipped up in one day. Its not made to be a 'long' flash, but rather a quick one. Considering it only took a day, I dont think it
will be anywhere near a 5/5, but Its pretty good to me. I just wanted a quick laugh, so if you get a chuckle out of it, my job here is done.
Enjoy Toasted :D
-hypertext07
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as hard as i fought i could not be tempted to eat toast but im not going to make any YOU LOSE SUBLIMINAL MESSAGE MAKER
lmao. ok.
Hm...
The graphics were okay, but there were a few noticable errors.
There didn't seem to be much of a plot.
I'd advise watching your pieces over a couple times before submiting in the future.
wow
The credits were longer than the body, but I gave it a 10 because of the dancing toast at the end. Congratulations, you are the first person in a while to get a 10 overall from me.
wayy too short
ok, well everything in that flash was good, the graphics of the background and the toaster was even great, the only problem was the length of the whole thing. spend some more time creating a longer flash, like maybe some kid tried to use the toaster then he put the toast in, and when it came out it fell in his juice, then he didnt know where it went so he thought its still in the toaster, so he put a fork or something inside the toaster so he could get it out, then he gets electricuted and the toaster exploads, then show him on the ground all burnt and black and stuff then show the juice falling on him and the toast sticking to his face. see all you gotta do is add a plot, and i just pulled that whole thing out of my ass in 2 seconds just now, so you could do a lot better man, looking forward to your next flash, maybe.
Bread?
A toasted bread going into a cup of drink? What does that mean? Please explain.