((( CUTE SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was a cute short, but it also loops you may want to fix that with a stop action code, but as for the animation it was funny good graphics and was very smooth flowing very welldone, just needs to be longer and have a preloader or something...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see... You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Short very short infact but neat graphics and such...

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not too shabby.

not too shabby indeed. reminds me of Looney Toons quite a bit. most of Karl's flashes are silent but rather funny. keep it up!

Not ******* bad!

I really like it. All the peaple that don't like it are... ... cravy. I really like the mum rocks part. Poor man. Keep up the good work and never give up.

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This scares me, i mean, no offense, but weres the sound, weres the animation, i mean, this is just a bunch of scribbles on a frame.
cmon, lets do better, add sound, ya know lengthen it up a little, and ya.

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hahaha... that was actually pretty cute. and it did bring a smile to my face. :D

sorry about that point off for the sound. i dont know if you didn't have any sounds on purpose or you just couldn't find any. but i'm sure it'd be better with a couple of sounds here and there.

btw... is that mafia man cold? or is he suffering from withdrawal?