((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, but could be better. like more effects, and more action, but it did presemt that stuff just needs more in my opinion, good story plot though i liked it, hope to see more sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the size, it was just way to big, especialy since i and many others have 56k, its a proven study that 50% of net users still use dial-up so just think about that when making a flash next time...

~~OVERALL~~
Good flash, could use some compressing though...

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Not parts!

No, man, why did you have to do it in parts? It's just not right that way! I still give you a good score because it was still good, but Nooo! I say you should've just combined the two.

not bad

good flash,got to work on your graphic beside that i think you got something good going on,nice work

OK

OK, now this chapter is the best!

Alright so far.

It seems like it could be good. But, i expected something much longer because it has bad graphics and a high filesize. I like long bad graphics movies with a lot of plot. Watch my "house cards, knife fights' if you want to see a longer movie with bad graphics that is about the same size as this. Some of your drawings were alright though, the ships weren't bad and the alien was quite good. It wasn't exactly boring, but i hated how it just ended in the middle of it. It seems like it was starting to get good, and then it just ended. Hopefully the next one will be a step up from this. Good luck.