cool one
it was a nice animation. a bit hard to understand the entire storyline in this one, but i thought that it was a pretty good one. nice drawings and it was fairly original too and you put a good effort in it.
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An ”Empire too tall”
Were your fantasy, have to kick in!
Erkefiende responds:
Well thank you.
And about the storyline, I know it is hard to understand, the point is that I made it to be hard to understand.
And that probably was´nt that smart.
Nice that you liked the animation!
And good that you liked it.
uh...
I think it would have been better if you explained the setting to the story. Watching it like it is now was like taking a stroll through childhood dimensia; I made up a lot of stuff to go along with the story, but it would be nice if you had included your own explanation, at least at the end.
Anyway, the animation was crude and the pacing was a little slow. If you added a lot of polish to this before you submitted, I think it would have been a lot better. Good luck.
Erkefiende responds:
I knew it would be a big risk when I did not add any explanations at all.
Except the actual movie.
You say that you made up alot of stuff to go along with the story, that´s exactly what I wanted everyone to do, but that is the hard part.
And about the animation and the pace, yeah it could have been alot better.
When I start with flash again, maybe I´ll make a better version.
Thanks for the review!
Empire too long?
This was one long flash, i think i understood it so correct me if im wrong
1 cat dude goes berry hunting only to find a pesky bird nicks his berrys which are for the swirly cat god like err .... guy
2 cat dude gets fired because he lost all his berrys. meanwhile the bird thinks about what he has done.
3. cat dude goes mental and just to show how daring he is decides to go back inside the fortress to eat a single berry and take on all the bad guys he can find
4.bird goes to see his old friend and mentor flying green rat/horse
about his antics of stealing and the rat/horse give him a slap
5.i cant be botherd writing the rest but basiclly is the moral that we should unite against bad people and create world peace?
..........................or is that just me?
Erkefiende responds:
Hahahahaha!
Empire too long!
Fun for me to read all the different thoughts of the story.
And I could´nt say that you are wrong on anything.
Because the moral actually is
"that we should unite against bad people and create world peace"
Yeah, you understood it correctly, I´m stunned actually.
I can´t really get how you actually got the plot of this movie, that you actually got everything.
Hehe, thanks for the good and fun review!
Haha, "Cat dude goes mental"
dont know what philosilo's problem is
because this was a good flash.
the music was clean, smooth, and crisp
the backgrounds were good.
plot was origional
but it's not perfect
characters need to be better drawn
plot was a little vague, try not to do that; unless you make a sequal
work on that and the next flash you make will be an FP
fifed.
Erkefiende responds:
Well, actually, I´m only 12 and a half percent satisfied with this movie I made.
There for I will make two sequels that will not have anything to do with this movie (or maybe they will), their codenames will be "Två" and "Tre", as this one was "Ett".
Empire too tall, and I did´nt have too much time on this one as I would like from the beginning.
Because of that the story got alittle twisted and everything got rushed.
Anyways, thank you!
This is what I wanted to hear ;)
Never...
Never use a song like that in one of your movies again. You ruined it.
Erkefiende responds:
so, because of the music I choose for this movie.
Not only one song but eight ones, the movie don´t have any graphics nor sound?
Well, maybe these types of movies aint your style then you should´nt review it either vote, because the movie don´t have zero graphics, that´s impossible for a movie then it´s not a movie.
Even you called this a movie so I´m confused.
You did´nt even watch the whole thing, probably.