For whatever criticism I may have, I think this was better than the sequel. It's mostly because it's a lot more like "The Matrix". The main flaw is that the animation isn't good at all. Everything looks dated. I think there were better cartoons back then. It was nothing offensive.
I'm not that familiar with the Kirby characters. This didn't have that much. At least it was a little unique. It had more action than the second one. I guess the originals usually are better.
My first flash ever
This was the first flash that I ever seen in my life. Normally, you can now watch a lot of better flashes, but this is from many years ago... I dont remember the date very well. So, the work in that time was amazing =)
but i see you put effort into it at least!
this is alright
this wasnt good video but you did your best
It's really not so bad.
Really, everybody has to start somewhere. It's not nearly as good as you're other more recent works but it's not that bad. Still Pretty good.