((( NEEDS MORE )))
~~REVIEW~~
Well it has promise but needs more to it and some fixing up such as fixing its looping issue, abit of color here and there wouldnt hurt either, but i think what it needs the most is some music and or sound/fx...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some music or sound/fx, and You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...
~~OVERALL~~
Needs a fix in the looping and some audio, but has a sorta good story...
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