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Here is a short story i came up with ...enjoy

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okay

notthing too exciting here.... just a random claymation... although your efforts were good in this one though.

not bad but not great

Knox is a good influence but try to make your flashes noticeably different both in character style and in voice style... Knox's flashes work (usually) because of the timing and the dry humor... that being said mostly what you were missing was the timing and humor. Try adding a story to it (more than the cereal loop) and slow down the events a bit so it's easier to follow. Remember that what seems clear to you having made it might not be clear to someone watching it for the first time.

It was crap...

It was crap.... but it was good crap.... didnt make me laugh, but i did like the machine gun effect, so... try again and try to vere off from the "Knox-esque" figures, but good luck.

HA HA !

ARE YOU KNOX?
OR JUST SUCKING COCK?
THAT WAS THE SHITTYEST PIECE OF SHIT THAT HAS EVER CROSSED THE SIGHT OF MY EYES , I WAS SO SICKENED , I WANTED TO SHIT ALLOVER MY HOUSE ! YOU SUCK AND WILL ALWAYS SUCK SO WHY DONT YOU GO GET THE CLAY , MAKE A BIG LONG DICK , STICK IT INTO THE FREEZER AND WHEN ITS READY , STICK IT IN YOUR BUM BUM !!!! MAKE IT BETTER<=

haha, no, your not knox

It might be okay, if you weren't trying so hard to act like knox, everything you did was emulating knox

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Nov 15, 2005
6:38 PM EST