This is my first sprite move.....in fact this is my first EVER movie. So be as harsh as you can!!! ;-P I hope you like it cos i'm gonna be continuin it.
((( THIS WAS NEAT )))
~~REVIEW~~
This was neat i had fun watching it, i like the theme and it was really interesting it kept me interested and even watched it a couple of times, anyways i think you should make more of this, like a series of animations or such...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i would work on some compressing, and more animations like this...
~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining kinda neat theam, hope to see more soon...
~X~
okay
Author's comments:
This is my first sprite move.....in fact this is my first EVER movie. So be as harsh as you can!!! ;-P I hope you like it cos i'm gonna be continuin it.
My comments:
Well, you put a pretty good effort into this sprite animation and for a 1st animation.... so i will not be harsh on this. what i will do, is suggest reading some of the many tutorials here on NG. also, check out the audio as well for your music.
i thought it sorta sucked
i liked it but i also didn't like it
ok
kinda sort but good storyline
ok.
way too short for a sprite. add more stuff to make it more interest. maybe voices if u like.I know how hard t is to make sprite but take ur time and either redo this 1 or make the 2nd part w/ any advice that comes along. Good Luck.