nice ^^
pretty good job, gaps in the music are kinda annoyin, but it can't be helped can it? lol...over all, "nice"
Author Comments
i started this flash the day i got the program. it sucks because i pretty much played it by ear. towards the end i slowly learned what i was doing. oh well. enjoy(or don't).
^_^.
music is acid rain by liquid tension experiment.
edit: preloader fixed. gaps in music somewhat fixed. sorry i don't know how to do it all. i just started.
not bad
it was an alright animation. nice graphics and a neat plot to it. a bit more could've been done to this one, but overall, it was a cool animation.
Good first one!
Presumably, given your comment, this is the first Flash you've ever made. If so, I commend you, you've done a great job! Hope to see more of your stuff, and also hope to see improvement each time!
Critical stuff:
Sound - You didn't really have any sound apart from the arrow at the start and the music, this is definitely a vital part of any flash.
Graphics - You're obviously going to improve on this each time, particularly colouring and consistent styling.
Style - Pretty cliche, but that's fair enough first time around. Hope you've got some original ideas clicking around in there!
:)
i love you dan
you know who this is and i love this,not the best you can do because i know for a fact, what you can do but you'll get better i know you will.and i cant wait for more of your stuff and when you get better you should make a remake of this flash it would be really cool but nobody better blam this because this is hard to do...so if you do go fuck yourself
Good, but you can be better.
Your drawings can be better. HOWEVER, your animation is bloody excellent. I like the music selection. My only true complaint is you need to learn to compress your files.