Lacking too much

The flash has a good loader, but when it loads, it does not automatically play nor does it offer a play button. Work on that. Once I manually play it, I am greatly impressed by the powerful use of music you have set for this flash.

I continue to stare and see a black background. Is there something wrong with my computer? I decide to close the flash and load it again, just in case. The same thing happens, so I decide to wait and watch. At last, I see some movement. It's very basic and there's very little of it. I keep watching, hoping I might see more. I see about eight seconds of darkness with grey in there which doesn't greatly impress me.

Work on creating a trailer which attracts the viewer and entices them to watch and become excited. Start with a powerful or strong introduction if you are going to do this. I have no idea what this is about and because of this, I do not like it much. So I hope these tips come of some use (although they're a bit vague) and hope you can learn and improve in future flash.

Looks to be sweet.

I was kinda dissappointed that this is just a teaser when i seen the animation cause it was so great and well detailed for sticks and there was a lot of juicy violence in it,well i hope the real one comes out soon. =)

Good Start

Its a good start, but you really need to add a bit more in the way of actual combat. What you had produced was pretty cool but if I blinked it was over... Put a little more time into the next one and you could produce something really cool.

waaaaaaaaayyyyyyy to short

there was like 30 seconds of words then 5 seconds of a shoot out

at least you tried....

umm at first i toight that was the opening scene then u ended it? wow the biggest waste of 2 minutes of my life, next time stop putting all your word shit and get some action!!!

well at least you tried... you get a 1 for effort, sorry =(