okay

it was alright..... a bit better than the original one, although still not all that great or interesting.

Hmm

I liked the idea, although I didn't completely understand it.

It wasn't great, the sound could be better. You could do with coming closer more, so you really see more detail/action.

I have no idea what that was.

I'm not sure what you're trying to prove, but work on your animations, maybe add some better sounds or voice audio of some sort. An introduction would be nice too. Hone your skills in a bit and try redoing it. Maybe it'll be a little easier to understand and look better too.

bad art, bad sound, no plot, bad flash.

Everything was poorly done, the music sucked, the art sucked, there was no plot at all, it's not blam worthy but it is bad, VERY bad.