Could you turn up the angst a bit more?
How original "i feel teh sadness nao i must diiieee". The subject of suicide alone does not deep philosophy make. My worst fear is someone is going to watch and go "omgz, i do not understand therefore it must be deep and meaningful, i shud think about wat it meens1". Here's a clue in: If a subject is confusing or appears to make little sense it doesn't automatically make it profound, it means the presenter didn't do enough to explain it. If there's a real message in this movie I'm missing it and only seeing a five minute angst fest and I'm sure a lot of others are getting the same impression. Next time try coming up with a message before hand and focusing on making it at clear as possible in your production. On the other hand if you're just venting your sadness or something I don't want to hear or watch about it. Next.