it was alright for a test...
hey that kinda sucked... i mean motion tween is fun and all but i don't think you should have put this on here. if you need help with anything you can email me at darkdragon_122@yahoo, i'm pretty experienced with flash
You're getting there.
Sadly, this flash will probably be blammed. Test stuff is not suitable material for Newgrounds. But you seem to be getting the hang of Flash. Two things, though:
1) Why'd you give the sun such a weird gradient?
2) The hair blowing could have been animated better. It just looks kinda weird now.
Hopefully you'll get better. I can't wait to see the kind of stuff you'll be making when you're 17 and have a ton more knowledge of Flash.
Heres the opinion..
I got no problem with someone trying their hand at flash and looking for criticism...Mainly because for some reason shit leaks into the front page when its 100% worthless. The 10 seconds of this flash was actuLLY better than most stuff that gets on there.
Anyway I have no idea what you were trying to do...you should include that and mayby someone can give you pointers...Other than that what you did make was very nice.Try putting something small together and releasing it...it find have a place on NG. But i dont think your "test" is enough to get a place on the site.10 for effort though.
since when did how old you are become related to how crappy you are at flash?