Experience should make you better
The music was pretty good and the voices could have been messed with more.
I used voice software like that before and you kind of have to change some letters about to get Mwuahahaha and others to sound truly the way it should if possible. If not, then good job.
Still, It needs lot's of time and effort, otherwise it's not really so bad as just needing work.
The content was ok, I couldn't tell about some of the characters what they looked like as far as a clock goes but it's your work so it's fine.
;) I'm trying to think of what else to say but I'm came on a blank.
Keep working on it!