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This is my first serious flash movie, i would like to know if anybody has any sugestions of what i can improve.

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Good but not long enough

Not bad for a first "seroius" flash movie, but could do with a bit more humour, violence or length to make it stand out more. Interesting.

It's ok

this is sid17 nicknamed DAN G, remember that, DAN G, m8, and I'm just gonna say that all those things I said about you being good at flash, I take them back. Joke. Kinda short tho, even tho mine could never be better :(

Pretty good.

I liked the way it was done, and I thought it was entertaining to watch except there are a few things that I think could be improved: the sound quality and the length of the movie. Other than that, pretty good.

Saminator responds:

Thanks m8, it's the fist one i've done, i'll try and make future movies longer


i know how to edit stuff into quicktime files sam. Email me, you have my address.

Saminator responds:

cheers jamjam

Not bad!

If you do more stuff like this, just remember to spend more time on it making it longer - it's better to have 1 good, long movie than 3 short, worse ones.

But otherwise, it's not bad.

Saminator responds:

Thank you, i'll try to bear that in mind

Credits & Info

1.28 / 5.00

Oct 30, 2005
4:24 AM EST