Nice!

Great stuff! The graphics are a big simple and not very smooth, but it's a good idea. Sound fits in nicely with the rest of the movie. A few things to improve with this would be adding shading and smoothing out the lines, otherwise all is good. Congrats on your first submission too!

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not bad one

it was an alright short animation. good audio, and it was fun to watch. i also saw that it was for a school project... hope you did good on it.

wow

i was in awe at the concludeing of this flash, it was very, brilianlty developed, i wish sometimes we got a dose of the real world sometimes on N/G very nice job and touching story

Hmm...

We all know these things, but sometimes we need a reminder. I haven't seen a flash like this in a while, I hope to see more. When it was over... I felt inspiration flow into me...

(The graphics and sound were good too.)

---Nothing new---

Sorry dude, but the stuff you mention in your short is stuff that everyone already knows about. Nothing new. This short was too depressing and preachy. Also, I doubt that religion has a lot to do with it; it's more about faith in God that makes some people do their best in the face of adversity. Life is cruel, horrible, miserable, and unfair. Realistically, it always will be. We all know it. It would have been more impressive if you did a short with some suggestions on how to improve THIS world.