Awesome!
The graphics were perfect for that kinda story and the sound was crystal clear. But it was the humour that got me, the terrorists clucking like chickens "HAHAHA". Good stuff keep it up you've got talent.
Author Comments
Did this for school. Thought it might be fun to share it. Socio-political undertones optional. Interpret it as you will. Thought Sham Bhangal's vcam was great to use though.
"No,FUCK YOU!"
lol that was fucking awesome
Aww
I found it unfair that the good part was left out. I mean, how the truck, the tidal wave, the plane and the bomb were going to hit the person in the car. I would've liked to see that. Too bad you didn't put that part in this flash. :( Anyway, the graphics in this flash are good. Nice colours. The sound, Nice voices for the character and nice sound effects. The music's not bad. Good work.
-Bahamut
O...k...
The artwork is rushed (unless that's the style you were going for), and the guy on the phone might have been funny if the unnecessary swearing was used properly, but he's just swearing at some guy - "Fuck you. No, fuck YOU," - and so it comes across as though you're just swearing for the hell of it, it doesn't make it funnier which it could have done.
It's kinda half-arsed, but by no means the worst I've seen. I think you have some potential.
thedak responds:
ooh, yer harsh my friend. lol, but i appreciate your criticism the same.
yeah, i'd agree that the script could be heaps better. I blame that on writing at 3 am, if you'd be generous enough to accept that excuse. The artwork was secondary - what i had in mind was really carrying the concept. It was done in a time limited scenario... it's always better to have more time isn't it?
Still, I'm generally happy with the favourable criticism so far. It is my first entry on newgrounds and i've been encouraged to work harder, judging from the generally decent reception. i'll just hope that if i do animate something else in the future, it wouldn't be for school, and that the quality will be heaps better :)
cheers dude. appreciate yer critique.
OMG PHILOSOPHICAL LEWL
It was pretty good, I seem to remember haveing a very similar conversation when I was 12.
Although because this was for school I am surprised you were allowed tos wear so often.
Keep up the good work
-Rhabdophobia
thedak responds:
hey! thanks for the great marks. yeah, i often forget to mention that when i say school, it's really college. lol.
thanks for the kind words.