It was well done, and looked ok, just way too short, and didn't go anywhere.
What was that for anyway?
Next one I'm making will have a plot and wont be too short and
I DID IT FOR FUN... sorry I went a bit mental there.
i got the little movie at the end saving ur movie yay :-) !!!!
^^ Thanks Im not completley sure what you mean but 7 shows me you liked it. Yay
First thing wrong: It's way too short to be that funny. Ad some situational humor or something.
Second thing wrong: It's British... talk with an American accent next time, people like that.
Well I am British.
well, is this ur first flash? if it is, its very good.
not the best flash ever, but i gave it a 3, which means i hope it stays!
No it's not my first flash, it's actually my third but thanks anyway.
This is a nice idea, if not very random. Make the new ones a bit longer and I think you've got something here.
^^ Well it is a short :) right okay I will try and make the next one a bit longer. Goodday to you.