Well, this is my first game and third submission here so I hope you like it, the next submission of the game will have improved graphics and will be better in many ways, well I hope you like it....:)
-Thanx for the reviews, Im working on tidying it, and I already fixed the instructions thing, thanx for the notice, :)
K
^^Good Points^^
I thought the best part about this was the fact that you heavenly player is in search of cheeseburgers. That made me laugh. Levels get progressively harder with more obstacles too.
^^Needs Improving^^
This game has the same common mistakes a lot of games have. For one, the character sinks way too far into the clouds, which can be easily fixed. Also, when jumping on moving platforms, you have to press left or right with the platform.
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please make the possibility to begin on the last level when you're dead , its very boring to begin at the first level each time
Erm...
In fact it wasn't bad liek for a first game,but there are too less options,and jump isn't "ip",but "space".More variety of opponents,maybe special moves,or "heavenly powers" will make that game better.
Good luck...
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well im not gonna knock you too hard since this is your first but still you really need to change it so that instead of having it say up=jump its spacebar=jump took me about 10 seconds to firgure it out though
hmmm...
Needs tidying. That's all really. And on the instructiona, instead of "jump=up key" howz about "jump=spacebar" The game is a lot easier that way and you can actuallt jump to the second cloud.
~J~