Quite interesting

I can see this flash with simple drawings, but I found those drawings good. The drawings of the characters were good. You got good art style there. The music you used fitted in this flash well. What happened in this flash, quite sad, but it was not bad. Kinda interesting.

There's a few things in this flash that bothered me. First of all, the shape tweens looked bad. The way the transforming looked, it was bad. Also, at the near end of this flash, my computer started to lag. :S Not sure if there's something wrong in this flash or my computer was being shit, but I won't blame you for that.

Other than the bad parts of this flash, nice work.

peaceful

The style is by far the best part of this one. very well done too, the trasition effects get annoying tho.

Nice

Noir music....very nice choice. I did feel like your flash was much like the anime too....very good job. A little too abstract IMO but nice job nevertheless.

Has potential

Nice story and a cool music soundtrack, but some of the animation made me cringe. Whether you were going for that effect with your tweens or whether it was an accident, I dunno, but it didn't look all that good. But none the less, I hope this sticks around. Keep trying and you'll get better.

I loved it.

This movie was absolutely beautiful and the movie was so fitting. I hope to see more from you.