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W&J : HappyLard

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me and my bro have been working on this for 4 months now, its about a candle and a ghost (Wick and Jinn) who visit the fast food chain "happyLard", only to regret it. this has a few extras in it so take a look at them too.
I have lowered the sound quality to make it run more smoothly but if still goes out of sync or too slow just lower the quality. Enjoy and dont forget to leave reviews, no pointless insults though cuz they hurt my feelings!

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For the most part, I enjoyed this. I really can appreciate how the jokes were creative. You really had some colorful characters in this! It did, however, lose points with the animation. It really wasn't that good. I agree the lipsync could be better.

It's still pretty good. I like how these characters are just random things. It kind of reminds me of "The Amazing World Of Gumball". The colors were pretty good. It's just fine for what it is.

I think it's time I reveiwed this animation

Well, for starters, jokes were great. You can't doubt that.

Secondly, the animation was abit... say? You can do better.

Lip syncing is very important. before you put this up on newgrounds, cheak the syncing. Spell correctly in the subtitles also.

In your next movie, i'm helping you. It's a shame the lip sync was pefect when I tested it =(

Untaken (aka. Jordan B, as known in the creadits)

hey

this is iphicrates' brother.
Check your Yahoo inbox
Iphicrates sent you something.
Don't worry it's not a hate mail
it is apoligetic, but it also has his flash.

Great! brilliant

That was some great script writing. The tooning left something to be desired, but it was tolerable, but the jokes. They were wicked funny!

Hope you do more.

(Get a better animator) (Or send him to school or something)

(Something....)

One thing:

Fix the lip syncing. Other than that, it was pretty good.
The graphics are neither good, nor bad. For style; well, the main characters are a candle and a ghost... The sound is decent enough. Also worth mentioning are the extra's: There's a short driving game, a movie and, well, some sort of 'making of'(what's up with that?). There are a lot of funny situations throughout the movie too so, given all that, this makes for a great submissions. Great work. Keep it up!

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Score
3.23 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 15, 2005
5:31 PM EDT