Ok, October 1st was my first submission to newgrounds, and its still there in my submissions, but it recieved a few complaints about the quality of the graphics. So as a test I went back and redrew some things a few months on, and in the end I redrew the whole thing, changed some soundtrack and added bits of pieces. I'll leave V1 up for a while so you can spot the difference if you like.
((( NICE GRAPHICS )))
~~REVIEW~~
This sorta reminds me like a real movie, thats mostly because you had a good story and the graphics were notbad at all, the "TEXT BUBBLES" could look bettr though, also thought it might be better with some "VOICE" dialog, great song btw...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some voices would be nice...
~~OVERALL~~
A good story, great music, but most of all a good story...
~X~
very good
very creative storyline! It was the most impressive flash I have seen when I pressed "random portal entry"
Really? Wow, thanks. God bless the "random portal entry" button!
Not Bad
The Story and Plot is excellent!!! very nice indeed, it was all fine to me, but some adjustments u could make, Animations, make it a bit better, looks chunky right now, the Artwork (graphics) atm they suck big time, and the sound, try and get some voices in for the characters, i no the effect your going for, but its not really entertaining enough with just those, some better graphics would hugely boost this movie up.
WOW
It was a pretty good movie, I enjoyed watching it. The ending of this movie was great, I don't have a lot to say about it, besides the fact that the script is wonderful. I like the graphics of this movie, so as it's style, you did a very good job with the graphics. This is a pretty good movie, well done.
>Lidov<
that was cool.
I liked it. especially the ending.