((( COULD BE LONGER )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was ok seemed abit short, i liked the "CHARACTERS" some good detail in each one, wished the flash was abit longer and went into other scenes besides just the one, it was also hard to understand what was being said...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles, so you can understand whats being said and turn the volume up, make it longer and much more scenes...

~~OVERALL~~
funny but too short, also abit hard to hear what the two are saying...

~X~

well...

the white poo thing has been discussed ad nauseum in cupboards and cabinets from here to miles away, even further than there where you thought over there was.// Good squash, but had you thought of just making a subtle sound like ..... ? insert sound that's better than the guy walking away saying somthing that i have forgotten. Exactly.// cow pat was also an obvious choice. well i suppose i rather my humour is a bit more surreal and everyone to his own, but, another poo? i loved 'mousse' and was excited about what other characters your wackyness was going to come out with. but all i got was a cow based gag left dangling over the 'first thing i thought of' shelf. Yes, it is hard to come up with something funny that's flat and brown and more funny than the funny 10 words ago. but i tell you, it is possible. have a think.

lol at poop.

I gave it a 1, "This makes poop look good."

That was funny, they talked british.

SCAT HAHAHAHA

You's a guy that likes poo

That was odd.

It wasn't bad. And you have a pretty good wit. But it was just too short.