NOTE: I KNOW THE LOADING SCREEN IS A LITTLE WIERD; THE MOVIE IS IN FACT LOADING DURING THE WHITE SCREEN. THANKS.
Another thing: this movie DOES have a story! If you said it didn't, watch it a few more times. Granted it's no final fantasy but there's something there-at least better than the zillion movies of stick men getting sliced up on a mountain. haha.
This movie was my first experience with flash. Considering this, I think it's pretty decent. I worked very hard and this took me about a week to complete. Please feel free to leave any comments, feedback, and suggestions for improvement. I hope you all enjoy it!
Finally: the sound is a little uneven, in that it doesnt go in sync like it should; i'm workin on it
((( NOTBAD )))
~~REVIEW~~
Notbad your for your first, it was actually good, you may want to work on the file abit, it was not real big but is starting to get there, also more effects within the flash can help
on this one, i hope to see more from you soon...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effects and detail, and some compressing would be nice...
~~OVERALL~~
Interesting flash, needs more detail though...
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good job
that was pretty good for your first flash. i liked it. i added it to my favorites. again, good job.
okay
It could have been better, but still nice work. At least it had a story to it, and all the basic elements of a flash, Keep trying.
emmm...emmm....
Well it was boring, maybe some dialogs would be good. Nevertheless u kicked my first flash ass. o_O
Not bad !
Not bad for a first one, it was long enough. Some improvements : use the Yoshi's Island sprites for Yoshi, and... I really don't like the musics you used. Anyway, I voted 3/5.